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2) Findings As the findings in Figure 1 show the profits of Mojo in Hong Kong and Singapore from 1997 to 2007.

2.1) Hong Kong Profits of Mojo between 1999 and 2002 showed a strong upward trend and reached a peak in 2002 when nearly HK$60 million s were made . The reason for the increase probably was the post handover boom in Hong Kong. This was however, followed by a sharp decline and in 2004 profits fell to their lowest point with only HK$20 million s (...) because of SARS. Profits then began to increase rapidly from 2004 and 2007. The growth of China economy is the reason.

2.2) Singapore There was a slight increase from 1999 to 2000. Profits have remained stable form 2000 to 2001. It dropped gradually from their peak to their lowest point between 2001 and 2007. Overall good. Remember that 'profits' and 'sales' are plural so cannot use 'it'.