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2 Findings Figure 1 shows the profits of Mojo in Hong Kong and Singapore from 1999 to 2007. 2.1 Hong Kong There was a steady climb in profits from 1999 to 2002. This increase is not surprising due to the post handover boom. There was however, followed by a sharp decline and in 2004 profits fell to their lowest point with just HK$20 million. This is reasonable as the SARS in 2003 did influence seriously to the society. In contrast, there was a gradual rise since 2004. The rebound was lead by the growth of China which benefited various industries. 2.2 Singapore In the 1990s, the profits rose steadily and reached their peak at HK$50 million. This rise is due to the strong SE Asian economies in late 1990s. There was a rapid decrease from 2001 to 2003. The profits stayed at HK$30 million between 2003 and 2004. The profits continued to decline from 2004 until they fell to their lowest point at HK$10 million in 2007. This phenomenon is natural as the Singaporean Government increased taxation from 2001.

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