Finding+by+Nemo&Yach

Section 2 Finding __s__

Figure 1 shows the Profits of Mojo from 1999 to 2007 in Hong Kong and Singapore.

2.1 Hong Kong

According to Figure 1, profits showed a steady upward trend and reached a peak (...) at about 60 million s HKD in 2002. This possible was because (...)of the post handover boom in Hong Kong. This was however, followed by a sharp decline and in 2004 profits fell to its lowest point with just about 20 millions HKD. The reason for this sharp decline probably was the spread of SARS. Then, profits began to increase steadily again from 2004. Up to 2007, profits already reached 50 million s HKD. It seems that the growth of China contributed to profits.

2.2 Singapore

As is shown in Figure 1,there was a slight increase in profits from 1999 to 2000. One reason of /for this may be the strong SE Asian economies in late 1990s. Then profits remained stable until 2001. However, profit __s__ started to decrease gradually from 2001 to 2003 and remained stable again for another year. Then, followed by a small decline from 2004, profits reached its/the lowest point with about 10 million s HKD in 2006 and kept unchanged up to 2007. A possible explanation of this continuous decline was the increased taxation by Singaporean Government from 2001.

Generally good. Some missing word - prepositions - and word order problems.