Findings+by+Winnie,+Tim+and+Jacob

2. Findings Include short overview 2.1 Hong Kong As is shown in Figure 1, the profits of Mojo in Hong Kong increased sharply and reached a peak in 2002 (...) near b y HK$60 million. The post handover boom in Hong Kong and Strong SE Asian economics in late 1990s were the reasons of this trend. However, there was a dramatic decline between 2002 and 2004 from around HK$60 million to HK$20 million which was due to the SARS. The profits then climbed rapidly to HK$50 million from 2004 to 2007. This might be (...) the growth of China.

2.2 Singapore The profits of Mojo in Singapore increased ste ady from HK$40 million to HK$50 million between 1999 and 2000 and it remained unchanged and then showed a decreased trend until 2003. This probably reflected the increased taxation by Singaporean Government from 2001. There was no change for one year and then decreased steadily again until 2006 due to SARS. They fell to their lowest point at 2007 with HK$10 million and they had been continued.

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